Friday, May 24, 2019



Fast writing





Who Koka Beccs
What
Where
How

23-5-2019


I am awesome because…
I value all the people around me. I show respect to the people I care about, all the people I work with and everybody that I spend time with.

I am also awesome because I love sport and I am the ultimate sporting supporter. I love rugby, horse riding and hunting. I have learnt the sport of archery and I am getting better all the time but I still can’t beat Charlie who is better at the moment…

I am awesome because I work at Riverdale School with some of the best people in Gisborne.

I am awesome because I live on the farm and can be up in the hills surrounded by animals and fresh air everyday.

In conclusion I am awesome because I am me!!!
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  1. AnonymousJune 25, 2019 at 11:51 AM

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  4. AnonymousJune 25, 2019 at 12:06 PM

    I love that you have been to other places around the world and shared your hobbies. I also like how your the best ultimate supporter . I love how you expressed on what you love and how you are gonna beat your archery goal.

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  5. AnonymousJune 25, 2019 at 12:09 PM

    I like that you talk about what you do and where you go in your own time.

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  6. AnonymousJune 25, 2019 at 12:11 PM

    I like your writing because you add lots of detail and telling us that you need to improve.

    The one thing I liked the best was that you are open with your blog and tells us about where your been.

    I would like it better if you wrote about your trips all around the world.


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  7. AnonymousJune 25, 2019 at 12:12 PM

    1.I like how you add a lot of detail in your writing.

    2. My favourite things about your blog is the map where you have put where you have been and when you said Charlie is better than you at sport but you will win someday.

    3. I would like it better if you added more about you in your writing.

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  8. AnonymousJune 25, 2019 at 12:12 PM

    I like ur writing because ur have all perfert writing...

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  9. AnonymousJune 25, 2019 at 12:17 PM

    Hi koka I like your post because you have told me about things that you have never told.……
    I also liked how you travel around the world going different places where you haven't been before...

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  10. AnonymousJune 25, 2019 at 12:20 PM

    I like your blog because of your great work you put into it.

    I like your blog because you got great information to explain yourself.

    I like how you added great detail into your blog.

    I like how you put in some key points.

    I like how you got great ideas in your blog.

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